Starlight9

Hello there YellowAeroplane, nice to see you here on YWS. :smt006 It would be okay if you've posted some of your old stuff, many people here would help you by ...

"Alicia, whats wrong?" asked Adriana, her teacher , she walked closer to her, knowing she might not want to blurt it out to the whole class. > instead of repeating ...

Ivy had rolled her eyes and went to her room, drawing her parent s' hesitant faces, "You came. I didn't know whether you had gotten my e - mail or ...

Hey there, Priceless. I believe that would count as a third review for your works. But I won't complain, I really enjoy reading them : ) His eyes widened , ...

Hey there Jalmoc, I'm going to start reviewing by spotting the errors than I'd give my opinion later. Note: There might be some parts of my review said by the ...

Hi there, beccalicious94! I have read your short story and I loved it. However, my review might not seem helpful because I don't know much about flash fiction. Just one ...

Hey Priceless, I am going to start reviewing by spotting the grammatical and punctuational errors His eyes were stone cold, so cold. “I had to do it.” > no need ...

Hello there, creativityrules. I will start reviewing your story by spotting the grammatical and punctuational errors then I'll mention my opinion about it later. They shiver as I pass ; ...

Hey Lava, I''ll start reviewing your story by spotting the grammatical and punctuation errors then I would give my opinion about it. (You might find my comments similar to the ...

Hey, it is me again for a second review. (Feeling quite curious about what is going to happen next in your story) Firstly, I'd start by listing the errors then ...

Hey there, LittlePrincess. Your story might be one of the best that I've read here on YWS. Kinda making me excited to check the second part. Generally, it was very ...

That was....hilarious!! I could stop smiling while writing this review. :D About your story, it was quite well-written but it has got some errors that needed some fixation. A 16-year ...

I may not consider this a short-story but a wonderful romantic moment written in a simple yet meaningful way. I wonder how you got inspired to read this in a ...

Thats was pretty enjoyable. I felt sad and sympathetic for poor Aden. Introduction: Personally, I don't like stories that start with very short dialogues. “So. Guess this is goodbye.” “Yeah.” ...

Honestly, this is a beautiful & joyful story. Also, It is well-written and has got some great descriptions. > Introduction: I consider the introduction the most important part of the ...