Starlight9

Wow, this is marvelous. I am quite shocked by the end, and felt sad and pitiful for the old man. The story is great and your imagination is even greater! ...

I might consider that one of the best short-stories I have ever read here on YWS. The idea itself was tragic but still it won't stop the reader from getting ...

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“ Ya it’s almost over. Today I’ll check for defects and let you know by tomorrow Shiva ,” I replied. “That’s cool ,” he said smiling at me. That was ...

Aww, these sketches are so lovely. I loved them all..they are random, crazy, meaningful and with great titles. Sketch #1: Yeah, the eyes may need to be redrawn a little ...

I am planning to read 'The Choice' by Nicholas Sparks. However it saddens me that I am going to read it online (which means that I would gaze into my ...

Fantastic! I loved the story and what I loved more about it is your ability to give out descriptions well fitting to every scene in your story. That one for ...

Hey there, Lakshmi. Your story is very touching and what's lovely about it that it is based on a true story. It just gives hope to every person that true ...

Hey there Twinkle! Your drawing is absolutely amazing! Actually, I see no errors in your drawing; it is well-drawn, the colors are lovely. Honestly, you rock at drawing anime :D ...

Hello there applejack, welcome to YWS :smt006 If you need any help or have a question about the website, visit this link and you'll get all your questions answered. What ...

Hey there new member! Welcome to Young writers society! :smt006 I'd like to know what sort of literary works you will submit here. Like is it going to be poetry, ...

Reviewing for chapter 3 And I actually manage d to find some of the guys Rose kept pointing hot. And this is a big deal for me because since I ...

Reviewing chapter two Rose was pointing out shirts to me sometimes (comma) but I refused them all. I finally found a cute and pair of short shorts that I hadn't ...

Some punctuation and grammar errors I've spotted: Going down the stairs, to the kitchen to take my breakfast > The comma won't be necessarily placed here, so you can say ...

A few errors I have found: I'm sat on the kitchen > "''m" should be omitted. 'You have done enough of that already .' She muttered underneath her breath as ...