Starleene

Im sorry but the part were her friend spills the beans about her loving him, that part is hilarious. Partly because i can totaly relate and partly just because its ...

You know i have to agree with both of them, your a great writer. You know just when to bring the readerin and just when to keep them hanging. This ...

I agree with guitaragrl...The first part was a bit boring. Add spicier words to draw the reader in, but i think that the plot is pretty good, just keep in ...

A man dies and goes to Heaven. He gets to meet GOD and asks GOD if he can ask him a few questions. "Sure," GOD says, "Go right ahead". "OK," ...

Two old men had been best friends for years, and they both live to their early 90's, when one of them suddenly falls deathly ill. His friend comes to visit ...

The phone trilled again; a hollow screech in an otherwise hollow house. Of course I knew who it was and I was definitely not going to answer it. I wasn’t ...

Umm hey, you need to really work on the comma issue like the ones before me. Try to use more descriptive words, phrases and sentences. You gave the actions but ...

I love your poem. I write them to but im really bad at it, yours...speaks if you know what i mean. :)

yahhh you can't leave me hanging...i need more..what happens does her brother come home...does she become friends with this girl what happens??? :)

The darkness was a shadow that consumed the whole body, from head to toe. Like a siren it called her deeper and deeper into the ocean of her dreams. Suddenly ...

your on the bus when suddenly you realize...you need to fart the music is really loud, so you time your farts with the beat.After a couple songs, you start to ...

ok guy's u have made my day seriously :) so funny, love the garter snake one it was hilariouse lol :)

[b]Umm HI people Im new here but thought i would say hi and..well yeah hi :D