Starleene

I'm here!! Lets get this party started: You NEED to tell me everything. Watch the capitalization, all this needs is for you to italicize this. This weekend. I'll be gone ...

This kind of story is right up my alley. I love the mystery of this Aiden guy. You better believe I'm going to read! Yes, this should be a fabulous ...

Hey Hey Starleene here to review! Get ready...Get set...Go! *Cool background music* The notebook kept in front of me was still empty. Maybe you could change this to something like ...

I think that all the obvious mistakes were pointed out by Finalfreedom. Yea I would really watch out for the "Then" and "Then", like Freedom said "Then" is a place ...

Whoa this totally blew me out of the water. Absolutely NOT. What part of the style of this haven't you guys grasped? That onrushing, headlong car-crash prose is the only ...

Hey Hey! I really love this story line, its fantastic, but...I do have some nit picks: “Hey you’re awake.” A familiar voice spoke. Ok if you just met someone and ...

Hallo! Im here to lets get to work :): I stood against the wall as Steven circled me Hmm I don't think that you could circle someone if their up ...

Haha this was very good...and bad at the same time :)I think its very funny when you say don't review and all these people review for you anyway :) haha ...

Every fairy tale story has to have its distressed female waiting for her Knight in Shining Armor to come and save her from her peril. Childhood stories told by grandmothers ...

I really like to main character and the way she puts the princess types into categories, i think that this adds character to Carmen. I cant wait to find out ...

OK I am here to review!! Lets get started Captain: Did I love this man? Did he love me? Why is she saying yes if she doesn't know if she ...

Oh wow, this was really good. I liked it. :) OK I only have one thing to say so here it is: “Tempus, Goddess of Time, you torture your people! ...

Hey Hey Starleene here! OK lets get going: Though you're dressed in rags you wear an air of queenly grace Just a spelling error :) She ? and ? was ...

Woww! this was really insightful. I really liked the last lines, they just add that extra spark to your poem to make it extra special. Loved it!! Keep writing, I ...

Haha when I was writing this poem, it just came out and I didn't realize it rhymed until I read it at the end lol :) sorry :/