Starleene

How much do you love me? I cried from within. my shame is unbearable and I'm burdened with sin. Forever I'm saved. Forever you reign. I'll give you my life ...

Hey hey!! I for one love this story (I'm such a sucker for tragic romamnces (: ). You did mention this line alot in your writing...maybe change it up and ...

Hello there! So I'm not going to beat around the bush, I'm jsut going to jump right in. You say this guy is drunk right here but the way you ...

There is definatly more to this story but this is what came to my mind right now. :) There will be more, I promise ~Starleene~

Saved Chapter 1: This nightmare again. Every time I was finally able to fall asleep it wormed its way to my mind and woke me up again. Shrugging out of ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Since most of the people before have already commented on the bad, I'll just leave a positive note :D It was short, sweet and to ...

Oh...My...Gosh... This was wicked. I wanted to stop reading it was so creepy but you kept pulling me back in! The ending! Ahhh! I can't even descibe how well you ...

Hey Hey! So I really liked this story as a first draft. I felt the emotion is some places but in others it was noticable absent. Like here: “Will you ...

I’ve hardly known you Merely a month, Even then, my heart calls to you Endlessly. When I think about you My heart sings, My stomach clenches There’s no end to ...

Whoa!! This was awesome! OK so this was dark, sexy, and mysterious!! Bring on the Heat!! Hahah. Anyway. I loved it! Yeah try to use a variation of words, otherwise ...

Okei-dokie! Lets get the ball rollin' here :) I thought I had died before you stood right in front. Huh? In front of where? Lucy? A class? U've came back ...

Hey Hey Hey! Starleene here! :) OK so lets get this party started: I really liked the suspense, it kept me reading and reading. Somethings to work on: I wanted ...

Whoa...I loved it. It was amazing how you drew the read in and introduce us to what is happening. I really did like this and I hope that you write ...

Hey Hey Hey! Starleene here. It seems to me that the previous posters have gotten everything, but I don't like being out done so I shall recap some little nit ...

Now this is my type of story! It caught my attention immedietly and didn't let me go until the end, where it flung me away with tears in my eyes! ...