Stargirl101

Oooh, getting physical in a closet! I love it! Though I kinda never expected Star to be gay. But it's so cool he is! Keep up the good work!

I'll just write about all 3 in this one. This was an amazing piece of literature! I love the whole story of the young man with a wife that had ...

On a glittering silver river Illuminates the whole world, and your blue eyes Slice open the starry sky I make a wish and close my eyes Yes please, I whisper, ...

The night sky looks so peaceful, so serene. But I cannot see the stars that well. The winter wind whistles through the trees, Calling. I lie there, looking from the ...

This is an extremely poignant poem. I enjoyed all of it, and it brings up alot of questions that people want answered. I love the poetic style of it and ...

Ooh, she works for her parents? I understand the whole family business thing, but seriously, what guy treats his daughter like that, even though I understand that is his role. ...

Oh gosh! I wonder what this guy's (or possibly girl's) secret is? What is it he wants from Casey? All these unanswered questions give the writing a more interesting twist, ...

This is excellent. 'Broken' is a beautiful piece of writing. I loved this and I hope You will write more. Everything is good. The grammar, and punctuation is great, and ...

This is very good. I am sure that Nate and Annabeth end up together, if Nate gives up drugs, and Annabeth leaves her family, but that's your descision, even though ...

This is very good! I'm just going to use this one to review both chapter 1&2. First of all, the grammar, punctuation and spelling is very good, and the plot ...

Poor Lee. Having no one to talk to. The writing is very good, and the plot structure is clear. I liked it alot as it gives a clear view of ...

I really feel for Jamie, being the rebound girl, just filling in until the real true love comes along, even though you really love the person. I can't wait for ...

A very good prologue. I think this shows up the superficial way people expect royalty to be and how this family overcomes it. Probably a strong matriarchal role in the ...

Whispering to those who did not know my name, Screaming to the wind who didn't hear my call. Shunning those who want to accept me, Giving up on things that ...

Thanks for the replies. I feel genuinely welcome (not sure if I spelt that right). You seem like very interesting people. Which is good as I like interesting people. Chirantha, ...