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Re: No Easy Love
Nothing is ever granted to a man. Not strength, neither the weakness of his heart. And when he thinks the open arms of love surrounds him, It is the shadow ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Rose
Wow. Kafka's reveiw was kind of harsh, even if it did bring up some points. What I don't understand is how she falls in love with Frank, yet ends up ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Before I Die
Before I die, Before I leave you, Before my bones turn to dust, I want to say, I wish I never loved you You, with your chestnut hair, And eyes ...
Dec 25, 2011 -
Re: Sepia Sky Chapter 1-Sky in Autumn
This is a really good piece of writing. It is very surprising that you are only 11. But bear in mind, there are some things you could work on. Sepia ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Hold Me Tight (Part 2: END)
OH MY GOD! I never knew Gambit was bi-sexual! Or that Bobby Drake was gay. Bear in mind, I have not seen X-Men in a while. And there is a ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Burning Soul - Chapter 1
This is really good! Volleyball13 is right though. I think it should be 'The first four years of my life were the closest thing I had to being normal'. Other ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: What a lovely way to burn - Prologue + Chapter 1
It was a totally cool prologue to a story I can't wait to read more of! The fact that the man in this piece is praying to God, and the ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Clair and the Stone Statues
Oh! It was so beauiful! This is a truly astounding piece of literature! I'm not usually the biggest fan of Historical Literature, but this was so amazing1 The detail in ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Remembrance's Home
There will be a house carved of stone, Mahogany floors echo the sound of feet. Light will reflect off the marble walls, Revealing my shape at the windowsill. The dust ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: An Evening With A Vegan
Wow. You have managed to capture the essence of naivety in veganism, yet you have produced a palate of descriptive writing which is not overly detailed, but delicately balanced, and ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Jyro Rebellion One: White Jay's Flight chapter three
Wow. This is amazing. The fact that you are only 12 makes it more shocking. You have amazing potential. Apart from one typo, everything else was perfect. The discomfort in ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: The first One
I'm not the best at judging poems, but this poem tells a beautiful story. Dancing together, we slowed To a more graceful flow One moment we were there And the ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Watchful (Edited Version)
This is a beautiful piece of work! Everything fits together perfectly and I cannot wait to read more!
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Tanya's Ghost
The night sky explodes in a cacophony of light, hurting me deeply. Her ghostly form flickers like a candle flame in front of my eyes. Laughing harshly, her once soft ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Jyro Rebellion One:White Jay's Flight chapter two
How am I like the first person who has commented on this???!!! This is astounding!! It's a beautiful piece! I know I should stop using so many exclamation marks, but ...
Nov 17, 2011