StarDuster

Hey. I'm new as well.

Hi! Thank you!

Loved how you got to Jacob. I found it a great read. You should definitely continue. I'm wondering about why Heather has so many dogs...I guess I'll just be waiting ...

Wow. This is amazing. I don't think there's much of anything that needs to be changed.

I thought this was really unique, definitely very cool. I want to read more. From what I've read from the replies, people don't like the title... but I it caught ...

I really liked the potential in this story. The candy cane and the blood thing was intriguing. Like said before, it is vague. The transition from the park (?) where ...

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