StarDuster

This was really really cool! How you ever learned to draw like that, I don't know, but I'm jealous! -tianna

I really liked this. While it tells a story, it is in the poem format and a definite poem. I would have to agree with you that a poem tells ...

I really liked this poem. As said before, you use the word "blank" too closely together. Try to use a synonym. Other than that, it perfectly described the way we ...

Wow. This is really good. It still leaves the reader hanging and mysterious. I really liked it alot. So now we know that the guy in the first chapter was ...

I read what you said about how you write when you want to express something. That's what I do, too. This poem in particular clearly threw out you emotion of ...

Hi Carlie. I hope you like it here. I know I do, even though I only started a little bit ago... I don't really remember the date now... Just thought ...

This story is really good. It left me hanging on the edge of my seat. Definitely suspenseful and definitely well-written. You leave the reader in mystery and wonder and wanting ...

After Twilight, I have tried to read other vampire stories and they aren't the same or in comparison... However, I really like what you have going. From what I've read ...

Wow. Just wow. As soon as the whole thing started with Jacob imprinting with Renessmee, I had hoped Stephenie Meyer would write a story about the two of them. I ...

Yes, this is very very addicting. I can't seem to stop. I want to know what happens next. There were a few minor things again, but I don't even feel ...

Really really good! You are very good at adding twists and suspense in every chapter. I thought it might go back to Mary's point of view, but I guess it ...

I liked this one, too. It seems better when you're writing from Christian's point of view... then again, I've only read three of them all, so I guess I'll just ...

I definitely liked the first chapter better. This does let the reader in with some insight into Mary's life, but it seemed a little sudden and short. About the destroyed ...

To start, this is very good. The beginning all seems sort of cliche, but maybe that's just because I'm tired of school.. I'm working on a story where I have ...

This is a very good start. It was a little awkward going from one person to the next in only 3 paragraphs. At first I thought maybe you should give ...