StarDuster

I thought this flowed nicely and led to the next stanza nicely. The rhymes were good, too. I think that it is a little confusing to the reader, though, because ...

Wow. This was really good. Very deep and sad.. :( I liked the first one better, actually. I don't know why, I just did. Plus, I really liked that ending ...

I didn't bother to check out what other people said, like I tend to do. This awed me so much that I didn't want anyone else to ruin it for ...

You asked me to honestly review your poems, so I came to check them out... This happened to be the first one I read. While there may be some things ...

Wow. Didn't know you could write like that (that's a compliment by the way). How come you've never showed me anything like this before? Although you probably won't take anything ...

Awww.. This is so sweet. I really loved it. What better way to cheer her up? I bet she really really enjoyed it! I have no complaints. How can you ...

I loved this! It was so great and descriptive! I can't think of anything that you should fix (that hasn't already been mentioned).. sorry I'm not much of a help. ...

Wow. This was really good. I like the chapters where you're going back to the past more, because they describe the character more, when she was happy. Thanks for letting ...

I really liked this chapter. It was good and definitely explains the trouble that some rumors make for people, whether they're true or not. It's no fun to be left ...

Wow. I found this amazing. I really really enjoyed it. Last year, I had to do an English project on Persephone and she interested me. It was very interesting reading ...

This poem was very good. I really really liked it. A lot. I love reading and seeing what is in every one's mind, exploring what they're all thinking about. This ...

I thought this was really good. I don't know why people can read something and not like it, but still feel the need to review it just to say the ...

I actually had a different line there... it was "cutting through trees" but then I used trees further down in the poem. I had no idea what to change that ...

This was.. dark and deep. I'm not much of one for rhyming, but since this is lyrics, I guess I have to let you get away with it... :wink: A ...

The music, A simple vibration Of string Like wind Cutting through earth And mountains Rising tall; A caress around My ears And a grip around My neck. The voice, A ...