StarDuster

Like everyone else has said: Welcome!!! This is a great site. Anyway.. this is a really good poem. Really really good. The words you chose are perfect and flow so ...

I always like to see what comes out of a person's mind when they just sit down and write. It's fascinating to see our thoughts form into words on paper, ...

I agree that this has a choppy rhyming scheme and too much punctuation...poetry really doesn't need so much punctuation. It's unnecessary. The rhyme isn't forced, but it does make it ...

yes, punctuation does exist in the world of poetry, however i would like to remind you that there is creative license. like e.e. cummings doesn't capitalize his poetry; it is ...

the eyes of a loved one their touch lingering on your lips as cool as a breath of morning dew; the comfort of a mother wrapped in color and ribbons ...

I really liked this. It's a really amazing poem. i think I will just take it the easy way and say I do kinda agree with what everyone else said ...

That's very good. Nice and gruesome with the bones sticking out hahaha! One more grammar mistake that is going to bother me until you fix it :wink: : “Mom, I ...

Again, these are great. Very oddly entertaining, actually, to read about people dying. haha. How morbid humans are. OK so here we go: some grammar again... Story #2 Totes was ...

This is really great. I like the idea, it's interesting. I guess we are all fascinated by death as authors, are we not? :wink: Well, I just noticed a few ...

you do have something special. but if anyone knew that, i would. :smt002

yeah..sorry about the color. I haven't been on this site in a while and I guess I just got a little too excited... Well, now you can read it. :) ...

Waiting with the Rain She stood in the rain. Her eyes searched without moving. Stiff and tense, she waited. The rush of the pouring rain slapping the soggy earth comforted ...

She sat, anxious, in her armchair, waiting for the sun to disappear fully. Waiting for the darkness to be full and strong. She waited and waited, her patience never fading. ...

Well, it kinda creeped me out.. I finished it exactly on October 31st, which was my goal and it turned out to be about 13 pages. Creepy... Love it or ...

Hi there Mackenzie! Wow! This is really amazing! I love the idea of a spirit, being able to move from one thing to the next and feel its pain. Maybe ...