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  • Experiment

    Experiment Imagine: getting burnt beyond repair, but you can't feel it. Getting cut deeply, but you don't notice that you bleed. You always seem numb. You don't feel numb, you ...

    13 min read
  • Experiment (new and revised!)

    After thinking about it, I decided to revise and basically totally rewrite "Experiment". Now it's from the doctor's point of view. If you haven't read "Experiment" don't feel like you ...

    9 min read
  • Experiment (new and revised) Part II

    This is continued from Experiment (new and revised!). I apologize that it's so long, but I'm just trying to get it all on here. It's totally finished now, but I'm ...

    27 min read
  • Darkness

    Well, it kinda creeped me out.. I finished it exactly on October 31st, which was my goal and it turned out to be about 13 pages. Creepy... Love it or ...

    9 min read
  • Darkness II

    She sat, anxious, in her armchair, waiting for the sun to disappear fully. Waiting for the darkness to be full and strong. She waited and waited, her patience never fading. ...

    11 min read
  • Waiting with the Rain

    Waiting with the RainShe stood in the rain. Her eyes searched without moving. Stiff and tense, she waited. The rush of the pouring rain slapping the soggy earth comforted her. ...

    8 min read


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud