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Re: A Tale of Two Drakes-Chapter 4 (edited)
OMG...lulz. I love your spoilers. I would love to answer your questions, so I will do some fixins and post as edited. Sooooo very glad to have constructive comments. I'd ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: A Tale of Two Drakes-Chapter 2 (edited)
Lol! I wondered if that form-confusion would happen. It's cool--I'll change that up some more. Railey's my most difficult character, childish one time, adultish another, human here, dog there, and ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: A Tale of Two Drakes-Chapter 1 (edited)
OK, I know I said I'd work on this "later", but I read your review prior to getting in the shower, and we all know what happens when we writers ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: A Tale of Two Drakes-Chapter 1 (edited)
Thank you Big Brother!!! :D Something to bear in mind with future reviews is I want the hashing out on what needs fixing, too, or expanded on, or explained better, ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Wedding Night Well-Wishes? (Short Short Memoir)
LOL!!! I love it when mistypes are pointed out to me--most of them are so comical! Yet another reason why we all must make sure to run things through an ...
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Wedding Night Well-Wishes? (Short Short Memoir)
Thanks! I will make some changes to the rubbed raw bit... and that entire paragraph was a bear! We're dealing not only with timey-wimey-ness (to quote Dr Who), but also ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: A Painted Ponies Story
. Apparently she thought I was okay because she gave a "woof!" (proper spelling, and don't you mean neigh?) that sounded like a sigh of relief and leaned her head ...
Nov 29, 2010
