StandStrong

OOC: I'm with Jabber! On about...everything. Question: Should we be introduced as new recruits or as rescued prisoners? Short Name: Sandy Affiliation: YWS Occupation: Xenoarchaelogist Combat Specialty

Mane | In the outskirts of the Forest City smells wafted on the wind, assaulting her nostrils with sweat, human stench, livestock stench, worked wood, and fecal matter. She flattened ...

Name: Mane Age: (16 or older please)

Whew! Not too many comma splices, and the person before me did a good copy edit. One thing they didn't catch: While we waited for Who to come around, Lion ...

I rested my head against the inside panel of the hovercraft, the cool metal a welcomed distraction from my pounding headache and roiling stomach. I rarely ever spent anytime in ...

I found several nitpicks in this one, so I'll just go through them in the spoiler. “Pixie, I’m not kidding. I told you no last night, and if I hear ...

OMG...lulz. I love your spoilers. I would love to answer your questions, so I will do some fixins and post as edited. Sooooo very glad to have constructive comments. I'd ...

Last review for tonight! Overview: I liked this part of the story, the explanation about Lion, the tech-pads, ect, ect. It is good pacing following the previous part, and I ...

I did find some typos, but I'm pretty sure people ahead of me caught them, so I'm not going to go there. The Beginning So the very first paragraph I ...

“Right. But what’s the freakin’ point? We should be trying to find a way to get back home, not sight seeing,” I ranted, still furious with our predicament. I think ...

So I'm quoting your whole work in the spoiler below, with my comments added in. This is what I'm thinking as I'm reading--it more closely resembled when I have a ...

Lol! I wondered if that form-confusion would happen. It's cool--I'll change that up some more. Railey's my most difficult character, childish one time, adultish another, human here, dog there, and ...

Thank-yew both!!! :D

I sit here completely drained. I do nothing halfway: I write like a freaking banshee, edit like a rabid skunk, and then get sucked into reviewing with absolute craziness. Oh ...

I remember Nate's post including Review Day. I was curious if we had a ''check in'' to participate or if it's a ravenous reviewing free-for-all? I was an active member ...