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beauty mark okay, i don't know what you think of when you say beauty mark, but i think of a birth mark/ sunspot and the fact that you named it ...

sorry, but i havn't read the next chapter, so i'm reviewing quite blindly. good creepy descriptions of the two tuxedoed dudes. threatening, but their larger size hint to a domination ...

ohhhh! i'm the first one to read this... happy dance. starting off, i like the idea of the musical. it will be dark and twisted and an edgier side of ...

ahh the complexity of the human mind. I applaud this story for many reasons that are a little personally based and not at all literary. 1. you use words that ...

okee dokee.. um, you jumped into the plot (which is okay lit device) but you need to give us some background. This case is not even close to being solved ...

i say only Nate can participate if he can diagram his own sentance

asinine bored inane turtle with a love for babies

Agree that exact time shouldn't be used because way back when, common folk didn't utilize the wonders of clocks. hard to believe anyone could live without one. Anyways, you might ...

look of the 7 themes of islam and the beginninngs of the religion (post Rome- during middle ages) that should give you a good feel for the religion and then ...

sorry, the little () just came up when I copied them.. :( sa(bb)atical sac(ch)(ar(in)e sa(cc)ulat(ed) sa(ch)em sa(ch)et Sacra(ment)o sacri(st)an sa(dd)(en) Sadowa [w pronounced v] sa(ff)l(ow)(er) Said

scelesta lupa! (wicked bitch) talkite! (shut up) google it!

here's the deal. you have to take 2 words and make one new word out of them. i.e. monochromatic + rainbow = monochrombow. fun fun! and then try to use ...

okee dokee. I was sick with the plague when we read these in class and now am having pre-final panic as they will be a majority of the points and ...

Yes, I too went through shakesphere hell in 8th grade. what i did was read a paragraph, and then translate on a separate sheet of paper. read, translate, read, translate. ...

This is just a little section from larger piece I'm writing, but wanted it to be critiqued. Suggestions on how to amplify Melancholy's weird-ness wound be appreciated. Here we go! ...