Squishy

you present a different style of writing where the narrator is just as active in the actual story as the characters are. the narrator here converses directly with the audience ...

okay, your writing reminds me alot of someone sitting down in front of me and telling me how their day went. this made it a little choppy to read and ...

you know, you have a gift for setting scene and place like no other. i really got into the story line, and the blurb at the beginning heigtened interest and ...

okay, I am really familiar with greek mythology, so this was a fun and entertaining story because I was "in the loop". But for others who didn't spend a year ...

i think ghosts are a government conspiracy just like Area 51, Aliens, lightning, and the powers of the tax dollar

oops! review got cut off short... where was I ? oh yeah.. and in the quote, you basically set yourself up to give a recap of what happened as your ...

okay. i opened your thread and immediatly saw how short this was. i thought, okay, this is an attention grabber, brief and to the point. but then reading it, it ...

duhduhduhduhduh... oh mmy gosh... that was awesome! you got me interested with the opening dialogue. breathing underwater.. coolio! i actually wanted to read more becaseu it wasn't corny. great naviga

i got alot of comments about how out of place my posting of Melancholy was, so i decided to put on the first section that leads up to the part ...

hello, my name is sarah and i don't bite. the last time i checked, i am a fairly nice person and like to talk to people :wink:

my opinion. time, chocolate, and get over it. those people just make us pathetic. ta da! :lol:

my mom's chicken sandwiches on homemade bread (made that day, or else a deal breaker) with avocadoes and freshly butchered chicken with garlic salt, lemon, and tomatoes and lettuce and ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

unfortunatly, the blood was front subjects with HIV, AIDS, and other horrible diseases. the person cleaning up the blood was not only infected, but he washed the rags in the ...

i like the use of 'batty'. its a fun word that we as language-downplaying humans don't use anymore and that fact that you threw it in gave me a good ...