Squishy

hehehe. i just had a conversation with my mytery loving grandma about this with a thing I was writing. she said my story was "so suspensful". I said, "Really, no ...

its about how immortal clones take over human kind and nuke the planet... jkjk... no treally, its a secret and is getting there. (will be in advanced critiques soon... come ...

very good, and i loved how you used the edward- loves- bella allusion but don't take it over the top with the stephanie- meyer- novel- vampire allusion. just a little ...

that was funny. but i really hope my dad doesn't come and look at the history on my pc

oh god. i can't bring myself to do it. nate's ode to cheese has stolen my thunder

comicbook! its okay to call it a comic book. we won't judge you!

okay, i liked it, but it all went a little fast. the plot line is wonderful for romantic fiction, and is a good base for you to go farther. you ...

i think the amount of planning depends on the person... some people are anal retentive and plan others are spacial and go with the flow my advice... plan until it ...

equestrian sport!

I fumbled with the note as we drove down the backcountry highway in silence. I wasn't even thinking about its contents; I was just thinking about me, Brian, and the ...

i try to think of times that i feel sad/angry/confused and then dwell on it a little bit. then i stick on some angry screamo music and then write. i ...

the only thing i can say is that the 'past' and 'present' switches were a little hard to keep up with so you might want to lead up to them ...

hmmm.. amazing..! i hate to sound discriminatory, but I've known people overweight who just complain and complain and never do anything. that just gets on my nerves. if you have ...

okaaayy. i liked the fact that you made use of the English language by not using overly cliche words, phrases and descriptions. i would locate the main character on a ...

you definitely got meyer's writing style down, which is hard for writers to do and I have seen many try and fail, but you got it. this scene vaguely reminds ...