Squishy

i like it! muy bueno! pm me when you get this up! very excited. question though, this is started to sound like a story i thought up a while ago. ...

It was Saturday morning and I walked into work to help look for my article. I didn’t dress as “formal” as I usually do: pin stripe shorts and a black ...

okay I myself am quite the mythology buff and find it interesting that you are converging all major myths into one story This will be brilliant as each individual deity ...

or it was someone who's account got hacked by a sibling or mom told them to share with little brother, but they wanted to keep their points and be brother ...

i believe makeup is a primitive way us girls express ourselves, a habit that derives from the fact that girls who wear makeup get boyfriends and girls who don't wear ...

this didnt necessarily make me laugh but i dind't read the first one either. either way I LOVED IT>>>> i've gone through similar circumstances in my life (without the ksising ...

hahaha.. math is funny.. i think it should be "through hell" and that's all i found.. good section of literaure.. would like a story to go around it, could become ...

i liked the previous suggestions... and you should definitely keep those in mind. as for the drink thing... i like the fact that you kept the Russian tradition and used ...

okay... referring to Quote: Good-looking guys like him always LOVE the good-looking girls like Katie Last thing, but I would change this as well. You've used 'good-looking' twice in one ...

okay, you succeeded in using formal wording without awkwardness or confusion, and the language was executed perfectly with no (or not obvious to me) flaws. the problem I have, though, ...

i live in Idaho (close enough :lol: ) and you captured the area exactly... there was a double use of the word "hooves" which I stumbled across. using the same ...

HOLY. CRAP. that was legendary... kudos... but there were some spelling mistakes (bleading, dieing...) were they purposeful?

i just read everyone's posts and DON"T LISTEN TO THEIR HARSH CRITICISM> it a cruel cruel world and what you got to do is just keep writing. just keep writing ...

i think that we should not use either and just write blawnde ha! see what literature teachers think of us now! (*says sorry that I am such a noncomformist*)

ummm. some guy who is obsessed with the weather or thinks he is just thunderously awesome squishy