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Not bad. The chin needs some work as it seems a bit out of shape (doesn't have that smoothness to it). The arms also do not seem that consistent. It ...

I quite like the first picture Adam. It does well in representing the idea that fire and water cannot be together since water puts out the fire. However, I thought ...

Hey there. I quite like this. You use colour well to create a rainbow like seahorse (which is pretty unique in a sense lol). The eyes seem a bit square-ish ...

Hello Spring. Were you not able to keep the camera still for the first picture? It seems a bit fuzzy to my eyes. You might also want to center shot ...

The hair is seriously off. It's like he's wearing a towel over his head. Also, from my experiences with physics, the torso won't go off at an angle like when ...

Hi there. The outline of the left egg doesn't look as smooth as the one on the right. As a result, this makes the left egg seem disfigured in a ...

Lol Dreamer, why are there stumps on the beach? I think you should soon the camera out more in the first picture. It's too close in. The same with the ...

I didn't do a lot before I started because I was being lazy but I've done quite a chunk so far today and It doesn't feel quite write. Pun intended? ...

Actually I'm gonna take back on what I said in my post above. After actually finishing the book, I actually understood as to why Jennifer wrote it in the way ...

I'm currently reading "A Gathering Light" for my novel study in my English class. I think it's a pretty alright book, but I don't really like Mattie's character, as she ...

Wow you're a good drawer LAF. I love the curls on the hair and the body of the girl. The picture has this kinda anime feel to it which somehow ...

What programme did you use for that? I get the impression that the soul likes music due to the way the pattern moves.

I like the 2nd one the best. I also think the neck looks a bit long and it doesn't really seem to show the body. Just gave me that impression.

I think there needs to be a theme to this. I mean your a pretty girl, but I don't see the message behind it. Look up Deviant art, the pictures ...

It definately needs colour. The style also seems kinda too simple, even though it's cute to look at. I think it needs some higher degree of technique for it to ...