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Thank you magic and ele for your review. With all the reviews I have receieved, I managed to come up with another way to express the story. I was eating ...

Thanks for all for the reviews. I worked according to what most had said and began clearing out what I believe is purple proses. I have hosted the edited version ...

Playstation 3 most definetly. Though Zelda is bomb, it's the only reason I'll consider picking up a Wii this Christmas. Playstation 3 has the best selection of games and will, ...

Hey ya guys ^^ For all those who have read my fantasy story, Angelsea I: The Last Sentinel, you would know about one of the two currently introduced characters. This ...

Hi guys. Normally I won't post on romances but I thought I might as well since one person told me to share a short story that I wrote for english. ...

Hrmm it's alright at the moment but what I dislike was repetition. For example: Kevin tried to move, but his legs wouldn't budge. He stood there frozen in fear. The ...

"Do you know why our skies our starless, Carys?" Meant to be "Do you know why our skies are starless, Carys?" I love how you kept feeding the reader of ...

Hi there. I have always been a fan of RPG games such as Final Fantasy. So I decided to attempt to write a fantasy story of myself. This is my ...

I beat zelda a week ago. The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess rocks! Midna has such an amazing and original personality. The ending to Twilight Princess almost made me cry ...

I liked how you described the action, though I'm confused as how the characters got this way. Maybe you should write a prologue which details the events?

Hey guys. My name's Andy, 15 years old and I live in nz ^^ I'm a big RPG fan (go final fantasy!!) student and a godlike character (lol joking) I ...