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Well I've already talked to you on what I've thought of this chapter so I'll summarize it here. Basically, I can understand on why you were showing on how life ...

Just my opinion here but I think you need to personally explain on what Legend of Dragoon is about in greater detail. Though I have played Legend of Dragoon before ...

if they didn't, what happened next was their fault, really. If not "if" I married the first slut I met once I was 18. I liked this bit. It summarizes ...

Chapter II: Sentinel Zane walked into the living room, stepping over the empty wine bottles that littered the floor and switched the television on. He crashed onto the leather couch, ...

There is emotion in this piece but you need to find a more poetic way of putting it forward.

Lol a lot of trees and grass. I like the bridge and the steps. It fits so well with it's natural surroundings.

Someone should build us a teleporting device lmao.

Sup and welcome to the site. If you like fantasy, be sure to check out the fantasy section of the site. Peace out.

Sup girl and welcome to YWS. You're a girl and you write sci fci? Wow, intruging. I'll promise to have a look at them later on in the day. Peace ...

H.O.U.S.E , Ghost Whisperer, CSI

Lol. Playing Resident Evil 4 on the wii = pwnage :)

6.5/10 Nothing that special. Kinda depressing.

So do I but I'm broke as and not to mention I'm only 15. I actually want to meet other writers that are in YWS though lol.

I think it would be better if it was split into the regions. (Eg: People that live in CA meet up somewhere in CA, people in NZ meet somewhere in ...

Ok, what's a POTC? I know what you mean about him having no personality... This was a fluke from the start. :( Pirates of the Caribbean