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  • Art & Photography Re: steady ready

    I like the second one too. Her outfit and expression fits very well with the environment, not to mention she's quite pretty lol.

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Cute Flower Girl

    The eye lashes and the way the legs were drawn make her seem rather distorted. The colours of shading is rather of. Either go with a certain tone of shades ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Fan Lady

    The shape of the arms look weird and the head is unnatural in shape. Hair seems to be too long as it is a bit longer than the head. Other ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Phoenix Guard

    The elf ears seem a bit too long and it appears as though the legs aren't connected that well with the pelvis area.

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Vegeta - Dragonball Z

    The details and shading in this is amazingly done. It looks quite realistic and does show a lot of skill in your work :) I think the hair sticks out ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Photographs illustrating my poem

    I like the idea of a doll staring out a window. Many ideas and thoughts can be generated by the doll and it could go either way.

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Super Mario Bros.

    It's pretty well drawn and the style of shading works well for him. The forehead seems bigger than normal but probably because the head itself seems a bit too big.

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Dragon

    Lol Flora. I remember this. You showed me this picture when we first met online. I actually would like to see this coloured. It is very well drawn so it ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Dangerous Ink (Chapter 3)

    Emotions of the character is told, not showed, making it irrelevant from the piece. Show us the reason as to why he felt that way. Draw on from the environment ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Dragon

    Descriptions in this do well in setting up the environment that your character is exploring, but the idea behind this is cliched. Dragon egg used in the plot...hrmm it sounds ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Unwanted Beauty

    The chin, face and nose are out of proportion. However, the cigar in her mouth and the way that she ties her hair does portray her character.

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Wall Painting

    Whoa that's pretty nice. Accurate and well drawn.

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Ink on Paper

    I like the character design of Hunter's character. He looks ready to blow up some zombies. The way he holds the gun, his facial expressions and the equipment that he ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Vet

    Hey there. I actually quite liked the idea of this. There was a firm base to this piece. However, it needs some decorations. I actually believe that Nel has potential ...

    Dec 7, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: ghost of the fire (sequal of 'just like me')

    Umm... For the benifit of squalls, and whoever else skims this piece of writing. The title says (sequal of 'just like me'), so the beginning of this piece is the ...

    Dec 7, 2007


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