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Re: steady ready
I like the second one too. Her outfit and expression fits very well with the environment, not to mention she's quite pretty lol.
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Re: Cute Flower Girl
The eye lashes and the way the legs were drawn make her seem rather distorted. The colours of shading is rather of. Either go with a certain tone of shades ...
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Re: Fan Lady
The shape of the arms look weird and the head is unnatural in shape. Hair seems to be too long as it is a bit longer than the head. Other ...
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Re: Phoenix Guard
The elf ears seem a bit too long and it appears as though the legs aren't connected that well with the pelvis area.
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Re: Vegeta - Dragonball Z
The details and shading in this is amazingly done. It looks quite realistic and does show a lot of skill in your work :) I think the hair sticks out ...
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Re: Photographs illustrating my poem
I like the idea of a doll staring out a window. Many ideas and thoughts can be generated by the doll and it could go either way.
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Re: Super Mario Bros.
It's pretty well drawn and the style of shading works well for him. The forehead seems bigger than normal but probably because the head itself seems a bit too big.
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Re: Dragon
Lol Flora. I remember this. You showed me this picture when we first met online. I actually would like to see this coloured. It is very well drawn so it ...
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Re: Dangerous Ink (Chapter 3)
Emotions of the character is told, not showed, making it irrelevant from the piece. Show us the reason as to why he felt that way. Draw on from the environment ...
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Re: The Dragon
Descriptions in this do well in setting up the environment that your character is exploring, but the idea behind this is cliched. Dragon egg used in the plot...hrmm it sounds ...
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Re: Unwanted Beauty
The chin, face and nose are out of proportion. However, the cigar in her mouth and the way that she ties her hair does portray her character.
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Re: Wall Painting
Whoa that's pretty nice. Accurate and well drawn.
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Re: Ink on Paper
I like the character design of Hunter's character. He looks ready to blow up some zombies. The way he holds the gun, his facial expressions and the equipment that he ...
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Re: The Vet
Hey there. I actually quite liked the idea of this. There was a firm base to this piece. However, it needs some decorations. I actually believe that Nel has potential ...
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Re: ghost of the fire (sequal of 'just like me')
Umm... For the benifit of squalls, and whoever else skims this piece of writing. The title says (sequal of 'just like me'), so the beginning of this piece is the ...
Dec 7, 2007
