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Hey there Gazza, The problem with this piece is that some of the ideas are rather vague and under developed. For example: Su Grey had never wanted to write. She ...

Hey there Valor. Do take note that I know that there are chapters before this and a prologue, I am only critiquing this solely on this chapter. Their master watched ...

Hey there Princess Pingu, “Heroism is the brilliant triumph of the soul over flesh –that is to say, over fear... Heroism is the dazzling and brilliant concentration of courage. “ ...

"gasps" Adam! Why didn't you tell me that you have a new chapter up lol -.- All was quiet save the lone bus filled with students. I think there should ...

Hey there Suz, She swore she would hear he knees knocking if the rain wasn’t smothering all sound. Typo with "he". Should be "her". Her emerald dress was covered in ...

I don't even need to read the whole thing to say that it is somewhat a cliche. 1. Kids with different element. Power Rangers, Captain Planet, Sailor Moon, etc etc ...

.:UPDATE:. I wrote a beginning last night. It starts with her weird dream, and then the wakes up feeling feverish with cramps and everything, and that's as far as I've ...

^ Known for liking Elizabeth

Sup there, have you played any of the Final Fantasy series + are you looking foward to Final Fantasy XIII?

^ Known for rawring like a Penguin/Dino hybrid creature.

Ayra...I had a feeling that you were pretty...but not this pretty. I'm shocked.

Hey Hunter, “Damned humans think they own the world,” he snarled, wiping the back of his hand across his mouth, snagging briefly on the tusks that jutted from his jaw. ...

Hey there, darkdove Emaline Walker awoke late at night from an uncomfortable sleep ,she twisted in her bed and finally got up and paced around her room. The part where ...

Hey there, He stood on the peak and looked into a vial of purple liquid. He drank it. He threw up and out of the vomit came his mother and ...

Hey there LAF, She struggled in her tight, leather skirt that barely passed her butt, and almost tripped her tall black boots. "Butt" seems quite informal for what is being ...