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Re: God Still Loves You (3)
Hello Suzanne. Trisha took the box from me. “She gave you Jesus Cookies!” Haha. She kept smiling at something else, always smiling. She smiled like you would expect God to ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: God Still Loves You (2)
Man I'm a noob. Got the names mixed up in my critique. Thanks for pointing it out, I'll change it now. Sorry for the mistake, it's my fault not yours ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: God Still Loves You (2)
Hey again Suzanne. I did promise that I would read the 2nd part of this :) The burnt red paint on the door was pealing like a flakey scab. Haha. ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: The Exorcist
Hey there Esme, it's been a while. Apparitions are not the dead called to life, but merely imprints of their old selves, Summoned for a set time to pass on ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: The Exorcist
Hey there Esme. It's been a while. "Apparitions are not the dead called to life, but merely imprints of their old selves, Summoned for a set time to pass on ...
May 19, 2008 -
Re: Sweeter Music
Hey Jiggity. I basically printed this out and did the critique there. Now I'm transferring it over here. It would be incriminating enough, if they hadn’t caught her in the ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Frozen Trains
Hey Cassandra :) Even though I was fifteen minutes early for the time we’d agreed to meet, my nerves weren’t calm. They were on fire. Ok. First of all, the ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: God Still Loves You (1)
Hey Suzanne. I ran away from home when leaves were hanging to trees by their last vein. Excellent start! Starting the game off with a powerful extended metaphor that skillfully ...
May 12, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
What a hardout Saint Razorblade.
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Desolate Hearts
Hey there dear :D Time for the extraordinary critique :) Cheeks burning, heart thumping so loud you’re certain everybody can hear, legs to useless jelly. Legs turning to useless jelly ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: A gathering light
Actually I'm gonna take back on what I said in my post above. After actually finishing the book, I actually understood as to why Jennifer wrote it in the way ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for having another typical cat as an avatar
May 4, 2008 -
Re: A gathering light
I'm currently reading "A Gathering Light" for my novel study in my English class. I think it's a pretty alright book, but I don't really like Mattie's character, as she ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: sanctum is real
Man I'm like reckless as on sanctum nowadays. But hey, at least I killed Nate yet again XD
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Oooo Rieda, you make me go coo coo...
May 4, 2008