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Hey there lxtmidnight, just dropping in briefly. You've got me interested, but only due to the last sentence. I'm curious as to the reasons behind it. However, what disappointed me ...

Hi there M Dragon, welcome to YWS. Good to see another fantasy writer. All I could see was see the dry, cracked ground stretch off in to the horizon where ...

Hey there Thealyn Rosewolf, welcome to YWS. The sound from the alarm woke me up before I was ready to start my day after one of his visits, but is ...

Hey there Penguin. I am back as requested. It was a village that was completely dependent on the surrounding environment; its rich oceans and thick evergreen forests gave it the ...

Hello Archer123, and welcome to YWS. My name is Andy and I will be your reviewer for today. The air was cold and muggy. Everytime I took a breath it ...

Yay Wolf! Welcome back. I get to see more of your writing. It's warm inside the store. Seeing Noah, a boy from my class, I make my way to the ...

Ooo, so you did post a welcome onto the site Lily. Nice to see that your a fantasy writer. Just curious though, why did you decide to take part in ...

Congratz Heather. I had a strong feeling that you would make it to that position one day. You've been so active and friendly throughout the site and an inspiration to ...

Hey there Tusker. The wind tickled his ear and played an impossible note on the flute. The bamboo called to him and it wasn’t long before he let his lips ...

Hey there Sheik. Welcome to YWS. Good to see another Legend of Zelda fan. Legend of Zelda for the win! :D Anyways, I've printed this out so that I could ...

Hey there Penguin, are you one of PenguinAttack's troops? It was a village that was completely dependent on the surrounding environment; its rich oceans and thick evergreen forests gave it ...

Hey Jared. The sunlight sprinkled over East Bristol, England, like sugar sprinkled over a cake. The dawn cracked over the horizon, and the small city was illuminated from the dark ...

Hey there Lily. I think the reason why your piece got featured with 9 stars is because it's actually pretty good writing. It's honest, simple and quite heart felt. It ...

Haha. Instructors and mods vs noobs. Anyways, the representation of mods seem off. They lack that sense of authority to them. They seemed more like normal members to me. Also, ...

Hey there Lilymoore, how are you? Welcome to YWS and I hope you'll enjoy your stay here. I watched him coyly, silently, nearly predatorily. Try not to use adverbs too ...