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Re: It Was Fun, Love
Hey there Tabithalillian. I walked as if I was in a dream. How does it feel like walking in a dream? Be more specific. I felt as though I were ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Killing Butterflies: a tragedy [1] --Edited--
Hey there JC, I am back once again to review your work. He didn’t have an answer for that, and I found myself crying harder. I never cried. Ever. Quite ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Shadows of Eternity - Chap. 2
Hi again KJ. Before I start, I would like to apologize if I may had seemed harsh yesterday, but I did it because I'm here to help. What's the point ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [2]
Banned for having silver sunlight.
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [2]
Banned for living in fantasy.
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: An Eternity of Shadows: A Vampire's Requiem
Hey there Xena, haven't seen much of you around the site. As the name hints, Zompira is half vampire and half zombie. When you mentioned that, I literally cringed. How ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [2]
Banned for having your username "ClimberSquirrel" instead of "SquirrelClimber".
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: The Nameless Book
Hey there Freeman, and welcome to YWS. I hope you will enjoy your stay here. It was a chilly afternoon, staring out at the blood red sunset, tinting the sky ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Final Painting and New Graphic
I quite like the first picture Adam. It does well in representing the idea that fire and water cannot be together since water puts out the fire. However, I thought ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: The Place
Hey there Danny, and welcome to YWS. It was cold. It was always cold here. Yet surprisingly it was also muggy. The place had a great way of making you ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: For Now Just Listen;
Yay Rieda! It's been a while. I don’t come here from behind mellowed pink serene silk behind cheap shower glass; I quite like your use of lines here. Having the ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Shadows of Eternity - Chap. 1
Hello there KJ. What's up? The first step I took into Lugosi was one of determination and anger. Being the new kid always sucks, but I should have been used ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Hippocampus Monstrae
Hey there. I quite like this. You use colour well to create a rainbow like seahorse (which is pretty unique in a sense lol). The eyes seem a bit square-ish ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Pictures 2
Hello Spring. Were you not able to keep the camera still for the first picture? It seems a bit fuzzy to my eyes. You might also want to center shot ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Teaser
The hair is seriously off. It's like he's wearing a towel over his head. Also, from my experiences with physics, the torso won't go off at an angle like when ...
Dec 3, 2008