Squall

Hey there PinkShearwater. Alright, I'll start off by talking about your first few paragraphs. They were kind of a chore to read because firstly, it does little to characterize your ...

Hey there. The first thing that I noticed is that there are some gaps in the logic of this piece. For example, why would the King send his daughter away ...

I feel tempted to do a duet now...

Hey there. Overall impressions: The writing itself is rather nice. You have some skill when it comes to writing descriptions. It was one of the reasons why I kept reading ...

Hey there Mandeyy. My name's Squall and I'm one of the instructors on YWS. Overall impressions: I think a big problem with the piece is that a lot of it ...

Hey there Foxfire. I'll be keeping this short as I have several other things to do. Overall impressions: I felt that some parts of the piece felt reductant whereas there ...

A/N: Hey there. This was a piece that I submitted for a creative writing assessment last year for school. Basically, the task was to write about something that triggers a ...

Hey there Roon. My name is Squall and I'm one of the instructors on YWS. I'll be your reviewer today. As the shadowy figure stole down the bleak alleyway, fleeting ...

Hey there christine. Not two months have I been working here as the kings' right-hand-man. Well, woman, and people already trust me with their lives! Two months ago my life ...

Holy smokes angel....I'll never see you the same way again... You are pretty.

Hey there Whispers, and welcome to YWS. My name is Squall and I'm one of the instructors on YWS. I personally have watched some anime before so I can see ...

Hey Angels. Suspending our mission meant failure, and failure here meant death. I quite like how you've used the rain to establish a depressing yet urgent sort of mood. It ...

Hey Karmas. A review above has dealt with grammar issues. Here, I'll be looking at your piece on the whole. Her worn dress pushing against my spirit and her bronze ...

Hello Lily. Don’t. That’s what they always told her. Don’t speak back to your elders; it’s disrespectful. Don’t play roughly with the boys; it’s unladylike. Don’t talk so loudly in ...

Happy birthday Nate :)