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Wonderful description at the beginning...I was just randomly scrolling through the young writers society homepage, not looking at anything in particular, and your words caught me--I could see in my ...

Wow. That definitely caught me. It doesn't make sense at all, but as you say, it's only a prologue. And as a prologue, it's a good one :) One thing ...

I liked the idea behind this poem. You expressed it very artfully. However, I usually prefer poems with rhythmic patterns. Like, the number and emphasis of syllables match. Of course, ...

I like the atmosphere this poem creates. It's succinct but sweet, and abstract, so readers can interpret it a thousand ways. I do question one line in particular...something about a ...