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  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Sight.

    Wonderful description at the beginning...I was just randomly scrolling through the young writers society homepage, not looking at anything in particular, and your words caught me--I could see in my ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Cut Locks (chapter 0 - Genesis)

    Wow. That definitely caught me. It doesn't make sense at all, but as you say, it's only a prologue. And as a prologue, it's a good one :) One thing ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Diving for Pearls

    I liked the idea behind this poem. You expressed it very artfully. However, I usually prefer poems with rhythmic patterns. Like, the number and emphasis of syllables match. Of course, ...

    Feb 1, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dear Joy,

    I like the atmosphere this poem creates. It's succinct but sweet, and abstract, so readers can interpret it a thousand ways. I do question one line in particular...something about a ...

    Feb 1, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members!

    Hi...I'm not sure how this whole thing works but, about me: I'm new. Obviously. I signed up a while back, but I never got around to surfing the site until ...

    Feb 1, 2008


You cannot have an opponent if you keep saying yes.
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