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Re: Happily Ever After
this is really great :) i love the whole black and white thing with the bride and groom :) it looks so romantic and just makesthe picture look great :) ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Brown Bear
this picture is really good :) i think it's kind of funny because the bear looks like it's pouting :) i also think that you should have made the snout ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: 2008 art project
these pictures are pretty good :) 1) on this picture i think that you could have done something different with your hands. it looks like you aren't looking at what ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Sunset
This is really pretty. but you can tell that you are taking the picture from a window because there is a slight glare. the angle kind of takes away from ...
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Beautiful Butterflies
These are pictures that I took of some butterflies
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [2]
banned for a cute avatar :)
Aug 18, 2008 -
Re: Depression
this is why i started this why i started this thread, so that i could understand what other people thought. thank you so much, it has helped me understand. i ...
Aug 13, 2008 -
Re: Depression
ok, my take on depression is that it is all in your head. if you are someone with depression then you can get rid of it all by yourself. you ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: Cancer
i really liked the poem that i came up with for the writing olypmics so i thought that i would put it on here :) As the cancer spreads, You ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: a dream for a dream-er
i thought this was really good :) there were a few things that i noticed though. 1) "I am a body dripping pearls through the pores in my skin," i ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: Misery Lane
um...i think that if you don't like someone's comment then pm them, and if you don't want to do that then please don't use foul language. it makes the readers ...
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: first pictures posted on YWS :)
yeah, the second wasn't my favorite either, but i thought i would put it in there :)
Aug 11, 2008 -
Re: first pictures posted on YWS :)
i took these while i was outside (obviously) but it is my first time posting pictures on here and i am really excited so please be as harsh as possible ...
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: Your Brain
OK, you have a bunch of different grammatical errors and that really takes away the greatness of your poem. Other people have already told you these errors, but you haven't ...
Aug 10, 2008 -
Re: Willawa
these are really great :) i love the focus and all of the great scenery :) those are beautiful places you found and i am so glad that you found ...
Aug 10, 2008
