Sportgurl46

I am really sorry for the misunderstanding, but this has not happened to me. I wrote this poem based off of one of my friends drunk father. Again, I am ...

1) I think that all of the colors on this one really made it look....cool. The way the picture was taken really added some edge to it and I like ...

OK, this poem used to be "Poeple say a lot", but I wasn't connecting with that poem enough to continue with it. The first 2 critiques were from the first ...

I think you just portrayed everyone's feelings about one of their friends at one time or another. That poem was so powerful. I was just wondering... did you base this ...

The atmosphere of this story was so intense. But at the begining it was hard to tell how old Amy was. And if the dad jumped out of a window ...

:shock: :!: That was so amazingly written! The suspense was killing me! Are you going to add onto it? If you do then you need to let me know as ...