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very cool. 8/10 that is....cool. kinda hard to explain, but i understand the meaning, and I think it is cool. (sorry, i like that word)

very cool. 8/10 that is....cool. kinda hard to explain, but i understand the meaning, and I think it is cool. (sorry, i like that word)

on the website for the balloon race the only way to find the balloon is to type in it's name. Unless you want to search through thousands of different balloons. ...

um..7/10. It was funny, but the last part was really random and didn't go with the rest of it. Congrats on the finished novel though!

ok, I agree with timjim77(thought I would throw that out there). This part slows the poem down Oh flower, you know. I didn't really understand how that fit into the ...

The person who inspired me to write poetry was Jack Frost after I read his poem "The Road Not Taken". Even though my poetry is nothing like his, he is ...

Do you realize what you have just done for every person that reads this post? You have just opened that persons eyes to what is really important in life. You ...

I love how you thought so much of your neighbor to write a poem about him. This peom was so amazing and insightful. You two must be close and I ...

This poem was intense. I haven't read anything like it before and I thought that it was very good and I think that you are such an incredible writter. I ...

wow. you really know how to show people what is going on. It is so easy to get lost inside the little world that you are creating while you write ...

This has nothing to do with what has happened to me in my past. (I tend to make people believe that what I write has happened to me) But if ...

ok, things I liked: You don'tt exactly read a lot of poems about the sun It was very well descripted and you show very well Things I didn't like: I ...

ok, I know how to write poetry, but I need to learn how to show more. The thing is....I don't understand how to do that. I feel really stupid for ...

This poem was pretty powerful. I got a little bored towards the middle, and i had to think about the rhyming for a minute on a couple of them, but ...

This poem was very greatly written! I love the story it tells! You are talented and I hope to read more of your work! I also like short poems, because ...