Sportgurl46

great poem :) i like what you are saying.that kinda sounds mean...but i just like the poem :) ok, just a couple things: 1) typo- How could i? the i ...

hey :) i really like this poem :) it may have started out happy, but i like the way it ended up :) just a few suggestions for you: first, ...

ok, first i would like to say great poem :) just a couple suggestions. you run your hands along my back, I smile, you smile back, I feel a tingle ...

the wool doesn't, the sheep themselves do. why are some people rich and others aren't?

jail

why couldn't it be a girl?

hey :) great poem :) i am glad that you put all your anger into this poem instead of putting it into revenge against him. A couple things: 1) Stanzas-stanzas ...

^_^ that will be the new saying instead of lemonade :) :) :) 8/10 :)

a big mean, fuzzy, cudly bear. that doesnt make a lot of sense...but that is what i think of :)

either a monk or a monkey i think they were going for monkey...but oh well :)

this was great :) i love how it has so much fun and inocence in it :) it makes me want to be little again :) the only thing i ...

8/10

there are so many meanings in this poem, and that is what makes it good. i hear your voice throughout the poem, and i love what it is saying. you ...

OK, so i came up with this, like in two seconds. it probably reads that way, so be as harsh as you can because i feel like this has potential. ...

Hey! to anyone that is posting on this storybook: C.J. will not be on for a VERY long time. She says that you can continue with it or wait she ...