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Hey persephoneia! Hmm. I rather like this. The brevity and the occasional couplet reminded me quite vaguely of Dorothy Parker. :] Also, I found it humorous. So there. :P Hahaha. ...

Hi! I'm here to review. I know you didn't request one, but the other chapters (two and three, I think?) caught my interest and I wanted to read the newer ...

Hey Princess! Here to review as requested. :] Here's how my reviews work, I split them up into three sections. Grammar, Plot, and Overall. Okay, so on to the review. ...

Hey again Eddie! Here as requested. :D Grammar: Only thing I could find to nitpick was some Anger pointed out. You switched tenses quite randomly there, from past to present ...

Hey there Eddie! :D SporkPunk here to review as requested. Before I begin, I'll explain how I do these things. Grammar first, then plot, then an overall summation. So, to ...

Hey Kyousuke! SporkPunk here to review as requested. :D Before I begin, I'll explain how my reviews work. I begin with grammar, and then move on to plot, and then ...

Hello stelagineva! It's SporkPunk, here to review as requested. :D Grammar: Overall, the grammar errors weren't frightfully abundant. But there were some. Here are a few examples: Actually, I have ...

Okay, so I don't usually review lyrics, because I myself am not very good. But I'll give this a go. :D Hopefully it helps! As the cold blows over us ...

Hey Porter! SporkPunk here. I'll be reviewing this today. :D Okay, so I usually begin with grammar. The sentences were very awkward. Personally, I had to read some parts several ...

Hi KitxKat! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. :D Green is for word choice change, red is for grammar, and blue is my commentary. It’s amazing what girls ...

Hey Elite! SporkPunk here for a review :) I read this, and this version seems to be different from the one the others read. So, overall, I liked this piece. ...

Hey! SporkPunk here for a review :D I rather liked this. It was very cute, and very informative about Filipino customs. Enjoyable. :) Only things I noticed were: one, you ...

Hey! SporkPunk here for a review. So, the other two reviewers before me hit the main points, so I'll make this review fairly short. You have a good concept. Do ...

Hey there! Sporks here for a review :) Green is word choice change, red is grammar, blue is my commentary. Sometimes Joslyn hated being Scarlett’s chauffe u r, but when ...

Hi Raven! SporkPunk here, and I'll be reviewing today. Tanya got most of the major points, like the unrealistic situation with the cops, and the anorexia. One little grammatical nitpick, ...