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Re: Rooms and War (title is ughh :/)
Hey there! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. :) So, the beginning, for me, was a rough start. But the interjection of German kept me reading. The middle is ...
Dec 16, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2010 Yearbook
Well, I joined this summer, and I must say, I miss YWS. I really do. School started for me in September, my senior year, which means UNIVERSITY applications. Of course, ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: new here!
Hey Zon! Welcome to YWS! I'm SporkPunk. But you can call me Sporks or Sporky. Or even Leslie. (: What kind of stories do you write? What's your favorite book? ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Hey! I'm Beka.
Hey Beka! Welcome to YWS! I'm SporkPunk, also known as Sporks, Sporky, Spork, or...that punky little Spork. Or, normal people call me Leslie. Anywho, I'm glad your search was successful! ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Make up a Swear word
Fug. What the fug? Fug you! That's fugged up. (:
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for having a cooler custom title than the one I have. :P
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: The Essay and You
Hey there Kate! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this. :D What I like: -Cute Idea. It's really, really a sweet idea for a cute little poem. -The couplets. A lot ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: You Won't See This
A/N: I wrote this in honor of my baby niece, who recently passed away. I just wanted to post it because I kind of like it, and I want some ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: What should we call the Wall?
Ooh, I like the desk suggestion. I also like the idea of scribbling in a notebook. My suggestion? I tossed around the idea of "bulletin board." Like, I don't know ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: no longer belongs to me.
Hi CannonBall! So, I like this. The syntax, in my opinion adds to the poem. I saw where you said that what you've posted is from Italian, so I won't ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Suicidal Moon
Hey! I'm Sporks and I'm going to I really rather like this. It has a nice rhythm and flow to it. The rhyme scheme is very well done. The imagery ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Entities Amalgamated in Force of Being.
Hey there! So, this is nice and all. I like the word choice, it's pretty, but there's no substance. You need to find something concrete about which to make this ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: A shallow puddle
Hey there Victoria! I'm Sporks and I'll join in with these reviewers. I must say that I disagree with most of the "corrections" that were made by Truth. Not every ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: To accomplish
My turn to have a go at this! I'm Sporks, by the way. Exhausted from crying, the little girl fell on her knees. Why is she crying? The cold snow ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Eight (Part 2 of 2)
*my apologies, it posted twice.*
Nov 28, 2010