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Hey there Milk! :] Sporks here for a review. I'm not going to be able to give this a serious review, but I'll give you some general comments. It's really ...

Hey futbol! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. Okay, so, I really think this could use some work. Mostly for the grammar errors, and a bit for the characterization. ...

Hey Brook! :) I'm Sporks, but normal people call me Leslie. Ahh, this was cute. It made me smile. :) It also reminded me of the time I had a ...

Hey there! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this for you today. (: “PREPARE TO TASTE CRYSTAL BITCHES!” Comma after "crystal." standing oblation, "ovation." Oblation is like tithing. In case you ...

Hey there Muffin! Welcome to YWS! :] I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. Since your chapter is short, I'm going to go line-by-line to make sure I'm as thorough ...

Hey there writer! :] I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. :) Grammar and other technical things Poverty had been complete fiction to me, until I learnt about it. This ...

It's here, it's finally here! He’d been wandering around for hours, days. They let him go without a word. Just as he had no idea why they let him go, ...

I've always loved photography---but more as a spectator than anything. But now, in my photography class, I'm learning about it, and I want to share some photos that were part ...

Hey Jashie! :) I'm very sorry this took me so long, but I've been so busy these past few days, and the few free moments I did have, I lacked ...

Hey there Kais! Welcome to YWS! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. Now, I'll be upfront with you. This has a lot of errors, ones that really detract from ...

Hi, Lily! This...isn't exactly a story. It's, like the reviewer above me said, a monologue. An almost bland one. The details are given with almost robotic precision, distancing the reader ...

Hey there! Review time! Well, Quillie got the majority of the errors. I really liked this, and didn't find it racist at all. You're simply showing a dialect of the ...

Hey there! I'm going to cut to the chase and review this, but just so you know I'm SporkPunk and welcome to YWS. new, unknown world revealed itself. You said ...

Hey there again! Time for another review. :) Technical Thingies Just as I was ready to leave , the professor decided to call me over to her desk. The first ...

Hey there! I'm SporkPunk and I'll be reviewing this today. Grammar, Spelling, and Beyond Okay, so I only noticed a few errors. I'll show you an example of each, and ...