SporkPunk

I'm definitely neither cool nor a boy, I suppose. This thread reminded me that I need to get around to cleaning out my make-up bag. I have too much, and ...

Hi Yuri! :D I was wondering if you could review my piece? Here's the information: Genre: Sci-Fi Title: The Robot With Human Hair, Prologue. (It's a working title for now, ...

I made some edits, added a bit more description. :D

The title will make more sense if/when I post more. This time, it's relevant! Though not immediately apparent. This is a prologue for LavenderBlue's contest. Wish me luck! Oh, and ...

How'd you know, Bolt?! ...Mehh maybe I need to stop posting that stuff on YouTube. xD TUBM knows what I mean when I say, "Get in the TARDIS!" : )

Sporks bounding into the room excitedly, brandishing a sleek, smallish, black case for everyone to see. "I've new glasses now! I can see without that stupid crack in the lens!" ...

I love this show; I usually watch it on Netflix. Though I think, if one looks in the right place, they're online. xD I like the one about "What to ...

Hello, Dreamy! Sporks here. :D Okay, since you're aware of the quotes, I won't go into those. But there are a few other nit-picks. First off, spacing. The regular-colored font ...

I got twelve, which is three less than I had hoped. But in my defense, there was this novel sitting on my nightstand. xD I might go cram in three ...

Hiya, Lia! :D Welcome to YWS! I'm SporkPunk. Call me Sporks or something to that effect. xD There are some FAQ threads and a welcome message here in the welcome ...

Eiggy Piggy, hello! :D So, the review. Lluvialover covered a bunch of the grammatical mistakes here, and there are quite a few more. Try proofreading next time, and also use ...

Hiya, Kado! :D Sporks here. So, just a few general grammar nit-picks. One, your numbers, such as 16 or 10 or 5. I know it's kind of a pain, but ...

Hello Tala! Sporks here. :D Okay, so grammar. The only thing I'm going to point out is your dialogue. Each time a new character speaks, you need to begin a ...

Hello, Liz! Welcome to YWS! :D I'm SporkPunk, more commonly called Sporks or Sporky or something to that effect. I'm a newbie too, kind of. Yeah, it's still my first ...

Hello there, f1shes! I agree with the corrections night owl suggested, and I agree with ziggiefred. Putting space between the paragraphs would be a great idea. I found the story ...