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Re: Bluelight: Chapter 1
She looked up at the purple-blue sky, observing the swollen grey clouds. The wind picked up, lifting strands of her curly hair. She smiled and inhaled. “It’s going to rain, ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Delicacies
Hello ReadySetStay! :D Sporks here for a review. Grammar: Bold =my corrections There are a few parts I noticed, stuff that could probably be caught in proofreading. Here are a ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Getting adjusted
Hi Drawers! Sporks here to review. :) Congrats on your A, by the way! Grammar: I only found a couple things to point out, otherwise your grammar is quite good. ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Does anyone keep a blog like tumblr etc?!
I have one currently; it's where I post short writing pieces I've created for writing prompt blog sites. I'm going to start another one, maybe, of thoughts. Though I don't ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Sup.
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Yo...
Hi! :D So I'm SporkPunk, but you can call me Sporks or Sporky. Or whatever floats your boat. Welcome to YWS! So, some stuff you should do first would be ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: Hello, my name is...
Hello, my name is Alec...see this CompUnit 5XZ? I designed that.
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but you are met there by Zombie Mussolini, who recruits you to his Singing and Dancing Troupe™ comprised of various forms of undead and other societal rejects. This troupe's ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Damselfly
Hiya, Blackbird! Sporks here for a review. So, what first caught my attention was your title. Good choice using the image of a damselfly and the connotation of it being ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
"Hello my name is Ebony-- sorry, ENOBY Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way - totally not related to Gerard Way, but I wish I was cause he's a major hottie." Win! :D ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Make Up Poor Names For Characters
Shanaqualeesha D'esiree Whamadyahalifax Jones. :smt003
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Impostors! (ISMKAD was awesome) :smt045
Jul 2, 2010 -
Re: JulNoWriMo - Until Next Year!
I'm going to do this, I know I'm joining a bit late, but yeah. :] I think I'm going to set my goal for 25,000 because this is my first ...
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: (ISMKAD people) Show off your avatars!
Hiya! :D
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: Almost There
Hiya, HelloKittyFreak! SporkPunk here. (I really love Hello Kitty too!) Grammar. I couldn't find anything outstanding, except for this part: and I left my phone in my most-likely-ex-boyfriend. I'm ass
Jun 30, 2010
