SporkPunk

I see the two dots where I have been recently. Soo...there are other YWSers in Bangor, Maine?! :D I MIGHT KNOW THEM! Like, in real life!

Becca We sat around Macey's room, talking idly. We realized that not only did the three of us share an intense passion for skating, but there were many other things ...

Hi Hiadel! I'm Sporks and I'll be reviewing today. :D Okay, so green is word choice change (if any), red is grammar, and blue is my commentary. : ) Standing ...

Blayne, Macey and I walked down the sidewalk, heading opposite the way I would to get home. Streetlights cast amber pools of light below us every so often. The stars ...

Quillie! Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. Okay, so green are my word choice changes, red is grammar correction, and blue is commentary. :) A cloud of smoke shrouded ...

I watched Blayne completely bash Luke, wide-eyed. He'd mentioned something about a pool party. I wasn't as strongly opposed as Macey and Blayne; in fact, I even entertained the thought ...

This is my first storybook too, Spork. And the first time I've ever really tried to write in third person. And the first time I've come from the perspective of ...

Hello! I'm super glad I picked SK to be my first SB. :D It's so much fun to write. Do storybooks have that many posts that rapidly? (And to think, ...

Becca The chant stirred my blood, made me giddy with excitement. And seeing Blayne standing again, with Macey, made it all the better. Cassandra didn't have a shot. She may ...

Becca I watched the scene in horror. That filthy French speck of dirt. I stood up on the highest point of the skate park. Everyone could see me. And hopefully, ...

I grinned, but not too broadly. I didn't want to advertise my happiness. I figured a gradual approach was a bit better with Blayne. I briefly glanced at her then ...

I knew Airhead was going to wipe out like the pathetic poseur she was. I mean, she carried her board with a mall grab! I rolled my eyes. Hopefully the ...

Becca "Rae!" I exclaimed, grin spreading across my face. We began to skate the perimeter of the park so we could focus on talking, rather than dodging the other skaters. ...

Becca I stepped off the city bus in front of Brindfield, headphones jammed in my ears. Johnny Rotten and the Sex Pistols blared, singing about the queen. It was a ...

Name: Becca Hooke Age: 17 Group : Skater Appearance: Average height, average weight. Pale, with black hair, self-styled. Hazel eyes. Wears clothes considered by many to be "emo." See picture: ...