SporkPunk

Hey! So you can call me SporkPunk, and I'm here to review. So you have other versions of this on YWS? Okay, so green means word choice changes, red is ...

I'm really excited for this. Last Reviewing Sunday, I'd only been a YWSer for a few days, so I wasn't completely sure I was giving the best reviews. :D This ...

I was wondering if you could take a look at the prologue and first chapter in my novel? Here are the links: Prologue Chapter 1 Many thanks in advance! :D

I figured if I was gonna review two of the three parts, I might as well review the third. And here goes. You know what my color code means. :D ...

Hi again! xD Okay, so I couldn't find anything grammatical to correct. Your tenses are all the same, nothing appears to be misspelled, stuff like that. And your word choice---couldn't ...

Quillie! :D I haven't read your other chapters yet, but I saw you had 40+ views and no review. I hate when that happens. Green is word choice change if ...

Yeah, in the army, NCO's are referred to by rank, or "Sergeant" if the were SGT, SFC, 1SG, MSG. Or so I was told. xD At least, that's how it ...

My music tends to change depending on the scene I'm writing and the nature of the piece. For my novel, which is sci-fi, I listen to a crap ton of ...

Hi! SporkPunk here! I haven't read the other scenes yet, but I plan to. I noticed you didn't have a review for this yet. Lee was brought to full consciousness, ...

Hiya, Harper! Welcome to YWS! I'm SporkPunk. But feel free to call me Sporks or Sporky or the name that normal people use when they want my attention: Leslie. :D ...

"Nice!" I exclaimed, eyeing the pile of candy. The gummy worms enticed me, and I grabbed a bag, tearing it and fishing out a couple worms. Blayne grabbed a chocolate ...

That's awesome that you're published! :D And I used to have a goldfish too, though I changed his name a lot. Goldie, Han Solo, and Frank were a few I ...

Wow you guys are so nice. :) Thanks! :D Poetry is awesome. I like reading it, but I can't write it to save my life; I'm more of a fiction ...

Hiya bElL3! SporkPunk here for the review. So, overall: I thought it was a good idea, but I found it difficult to follow and immerse myself in. Is there a ...

Hi Phillip! :D Welcome to YWS! I'm SporkPunk, but normal people usually call me Leslie. You'll definitely learn a lot here. And ninja is right about most of us being ...