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Re: This is the part where you request a review. (OPEN)
Done! Have been for a while, actually. Who's next? I'd love to review! :smt003
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Your crushes and stories.
I have a "crush" on one of my best friends. He and I've known each other since junior year, and we get along really well. We've even gone on a ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Reviews! Look at the damage you have wrought!
Good job, everyone. This is so awesome! Go YWS! :smt041
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Untraceable
Yay! :) I'm pretty excited for this. Thief: Name: David Massey Age (17-25): 19 Gender: Male Known as: Sometimes he's called Davey Ramone (play on all the Ramones) Appearance (written ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
I Just Want to Have Something to Do--The Ramones. :D
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Bestial Conflict - Chapter 1 - Revised
I got your message so I toddled on over here to check it out. Sooo.... Yes, the ending is great! I really like it. Good job in the revision, Kyou! ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Hey
Hi! Welcome to YWS, basically the coolest place on the entire interwebs. :smt003 Mira seems to have gotten all the good questions and explanations in, so I think I'll ask ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Missing (1)
Hi austenite! I was intrigued by both pieces, so I'm here to review as requested. Grammar My bedroom was at the front of the house, and last summer, in a ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: Willow Creek 1.1
Hi austenite! Here to review as requested. :D So, my reviews work like this: Grammar, then plot, then overall. Let's begin. Grammar: While your grammar is mostly great, I have ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
I meant that...like, his body is there, but he isn't perceiving reality (hence he can't tell Troy and Boomer are there...?) since his consciousness is in the computer. I can ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
Troy // Nolan // 6:12pm Boomer and I ran hurriedly to HQ. Something big was going down; I could feel it. And we missed it. I uttered a low string ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: This is the part where you request a review. (OPEN)
Finished! You're welcome, and both pieces were brilliant! Who's next?
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hi there, blackbird! Here as requested. Grammar: The diamond necklace was like broken glass in her hands, exuding some harsh innate gleam. I think a comma after harsh would be ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: This is the part where you request a review. (OPEN)
Finished with Kyou's (which is great!) and I'll review yours, blackbird, as soon as I'm back from dinner. :D
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Bestial Conflict - Chapter 1 - Revised
Kyou! It's me again, here as requested! :D First, before I truly begin, thanks for having me read this again. I feel like you found my review really helpful, which ...
Sep 2, 2010