SporkPunk

Hey there, Rain. I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. Technical blahblahblah: "I wish i could! But i just dont think i can take the pain. The knife i ...

Hi there, PadrePio! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. Grammar: I could find nothing inherently wrong with the piece, so good there. All the tenses, the spelling, even the ...

I'm going to try to get at least...twelve or so. :smt001

YAY SNOINK! :D :smt003 In honor of this prodigious achievement, I've hired a lovely troupe of dancing pink elephants! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: Just

Hey! First off, in general, I really like the idea of this poem. It's quite original. :D The only thing I didn't really like about it was the repetition. Sometimes, ...

Hey there! I'm going to attempt to review this. First off, great piece. I love the imagery you both used, the word choice, pretty much everything. I wish I could ...

Hi Seana, I don't really think this is working. I'm not going to "nag" as you put it, but I will say a few things. I can see that you ...

So, I've tried several approaches. Epic introduction to be funny, something adorably awkward, and straight forward. None of it *fits.* So...I'll just write and see where it takes me. Basic ...

¡Hola amiga! ¡Bienvenidos a la sociedad de los escritores jovenes, o, YWS! ¿Cómo estás? Hablo español. :) Español no es mi lengua nativa, pero estoy tomando la lengua en escuela. ...

Calligraphy, you listen to Spose? I didn't think anyone outside of Maine even knew of him! xD Straight to Hell--The Clash. I love, love this song. Even if M.I.A. sampled ...

Well, I'm completely fluent in English. I can read and write in Spanish fairly fluently, and I can somewhat understand Catalan, which is rather like Spanish but not quite. I ...

Davey "Yeah, the name...Tulip Cosner? Ring any bells?" I whisper into the mouthpiece of my Android. I much prefer texting, but the Boss was very particular--phone calls only. "Hm. The ...

Hey guys, this is my entry for Skins' contest, the opening line one. I had a lot of fun with this, and I hope you enjoy reading it as much ...

Hey SilentOllie, This poem was pretty good, as far as the idea goes. The speaker's tone is communicated well, and the mood is also, somewhat. However, there are some things ...

Hey silentpages! You can call me Sporky. :smt001 I'll be reviewing this today. before it was time to ditch it "It" here is ambiguous; it could be either in reference ...