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I'm at...fourteen right now, but I want to get at least to twenty. ...We are so far behind right now. Is it because the site crashed?

Hi sillyducky! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this! I know I'm really late on this, but I kept forgetting to review it after I saw it. It's awesome, brilliant, ...

Hi jDawn! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. :) Okay, so the other reviewers seem to have gotten most of the critiquing points. I'll just comment on what I ...

Hi Elinor! SporkPunk here. This poem doesn't quite convey much of anything poetic. It reads much like prose, and nothing is realized, or gained from it. It's very safe. You ...

Hi kaiden! I really like this. I've always liked semi-stream-of-consciousness pieces, and this is good. It has a sort of rhyme scheme, but not quite. I think this could flow ...

Hi Flame, So, this is an alright poem. It can definitely be improved upon. Jagged got most, if not all, of the points worth speaking of. I'll just reiterate about ...

Hello jemjive! :D So, I have to agree with the reviewers before me that this isn't quite original, but it isn't bad. I rather liked it. The repetition is good, ...

Hi there! I'll have a go at reviewing this today. I won't repeat what the others have said about commas and whatnot. I will suggest more spacing between paragraphs. As ...

Hi there! I'm Sporks, and I'll review this today This is such a nice little poem. I like the message it conveys. However, it was quite short. I think you ...

Hi there! I'll review this today. Grammar: "The Tavern , " h e said. He looked at his watch. "Logan should already be here. Ah, there he is." Logan was ...

Hi Jade! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. I cannot be beautiful if no one can see me. I like this! My eyelids sprouted rigid wrinkles as I ...

Hi Jash! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. Now, this piece is rather lengthy, so rather than going through and picking out everything I can find, I'll give you ...

Hello Teddybear! I'm SporkPunk and I'll be reviewing this today. Grammar It was mostly good. I couldn't find to much of anything to nitpick, though this might be something worth ...

Hey there! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. :D Grammar stuff: As far as I could tell, the tenses were good, and overall the grammar was good. Oh, ...

Ben! Hi! I don't know if I can review this well, but I will give some general comments. 1. Voice---I loved it! 2. Tone---Seems like you enjoyed writing this, right? ...