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Hi Tenyo! I really liked this. It was both adorable and sad. I don't know, I'm in between. I like the repetition of "poor little eraser dog" but I can ...

Hey there! I really liked this and the inspiration for the poem. It was meaningful but simple. I like that, how you kept from making it needlessly complex. Only nit ...

Hi there! I didn't really gather the same meaning that Tiger did. I sort of got that the portraits was, essentially, everyday life and all the negativity along with it. ...

Up to 26. I've never done this many in one day before. :D Still have 100+ to go...

She sat alone, in the rain She laughed as the wind blew ten years it was going to be Generally, numerals aren't used unless for a special reason. I couldn't ...

Hi there! So this is backwards I guess, but I read and reviewed chapter nine right before this. This chapter has some of the same issues I pointed out earlier, ...

Hi there! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today! This is really good. I love the imagery---it's so vivid and you feel like you're right there in the nightmare too. ...

Hi there! As requested, I won't go in-depth and review it randomly. I'll just give you my thoughts. It was funny, very good parody. The movie title was awesome, I ...

Hi Blue! I like the way you began this, the images of photographs and cursive are lovely. I like the flow, that was great. There are a few places with ...

Hello! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll add on to these reviews. Hopefully. First, stanzas! They're wonderful little things. You have what I like to call a "Wall-O-Text" and it's truly daunting ...

Hey Thee, I'll be upfront. This isn't very good. It's rather sloppy, to be honest. There is a subtle yet vital difference between your and you're, which you seem to ...

Don't tell your reader how to interpret your poem! That spoils it. Oh, and hello. :) Anyway, I actually like how the beginning works, but the third line of your ...

Hi there Romanceotaku. SporkPunk here, and I'll be reviewing this today. First off, the rhyming doesn't really work for me. Without a rhyme scheme to go with it, the rhyme ...

Blackbird, First off, your poetry is brilliant. I read the older version, but I don't remember if I reviewed. This is such an improvement. I know it's not helpful, but ...

Hi there! SporkPunk here to review! This was really good. I like how you turned a mundane assignment into something great. You make the rhyme schem work, and the flow ...