SporkPunk

Hey there, Megsug! Thanks for requesting a review. I apologize for not getting to it more quickly, I had some projects to do the past few days. But I'm here ...

Yay us! :D We're so awesome, everyone. Also...on the words at the bottom, I am determined to use them next Review day. :D

Hiya, Wolfman! I kind of sort of love your username. Anyway, on to the review. First, I really liked this. I haven't read the first part (there is one, right? ...

19 I think? I don't know. Maybe I'll crank out a few more before retiring to homework. I'll try and get the ones Nate posted! :P Also, I have the ...

Hey there, Retro! :] Random red runs are scattered across my arm. Some see it as a cry of help, or for attention. I was looking for escape. Ah, a ...

Hi there! :D I think this is a pretty great poem. I really liked it a lot. My only nitpick is the line "clean my boots will be." It doesn't ...

Hey there :D This was really, really ambitious. Second person, prose-y poem style, and interesting subject matter. While I admire how you tackle all of these things, I don't know ...

Hey there Be! :P I must say, overall, I like this poem. It's cute, sweet, simple. However, I have one nitpick. "They're pinky promises." ...I don't know about other readers, ...

Hi Hayden! Sporks here to review. To be honest, I'm not going to pretend to be a poetry expert, but I kind of liked the repetition used here. It kind ...

Hey there! Sporks dropping by to review. The machines she’s wired to scream her departure. This is awkward. Maybe change up the wording? ten-oh-seven pm, Generally, times are best as ...

Hey Jennya! I like this. A lot. :D I dunno, it's just really amusing and kinda funny. I don't think there's anything technically wrong with it. I don't mind that ...

Hey Kat. :] I'm trying really, really hard to find something to nitpick, so I can feel helpful as a reviewer. But there really isn't anything technical I can pick ...

Hey tinkem! Sporks here for a review. Hm. I can't say I'm a huge fan of this kind of poetry. The angsty thing has been done a lot before. That's ...

Hi Rosey! What can I say? I really, absolutely adore these poems. The rhythm and flow are very nice. I read them twice because it was so good. :p The ...

Hi Mask! :] Review time? So, I like this. The imagery is quite nice, but some of your references make little sense. (Like the bright light, and the everyone being ...