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I'll get in as many as I can between rounds of my tournament. :D Basically, I'll try to get about 30 today.

Thanks for the advice, everyone. I posted another essay. If you guys had the free time, I'd really appreciate the comments. Thank you again! Leslie/Spork

Hi guys. So I thought about your suggestions, and tried a different approach to the essay. The topic I picked is: "Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, ...

I'm neoncookies on the main site. :D Oh my...what am I getting myself into?

Hi, Alexxa! Spork here to review. Sorry this took so long...school's quite busy, and it's homecoming, so I've been at school more than home. But now I have free time. ...

Okay, guys, thanks very much for your input! I didn't really understand why my teacher emphasized more narrative essays as college essays, because I was originally thinking what you all ...

Bloom

9/10 because I love purple, but I've never heard that song. xD

9/10 It looks really cool. : )

Hi there! So, I have to agree with the other reviewers. Technically it's a wonderful piece, and the subject matter is prevalent and thought-provoking and all that jazz, but where's ...

Persephoneia // Coral, You're a great poet. I find it difficult to nitpick your poetry, because, stylistically there is nothing necessarily wrong with it. I'll nitpick though, and say that ...

Hey! I really liked the rhyme, the subject matter, all around it was a good piece. Only nitpick I have is that one of your lines is awkward---the one with ...

Hey there tkpejb! I'm SporkPunk and I'll review this today. I think that this poem isn't bad, not at all. I think the repetition of "a dream" aids the poem, ...

Hi xLollipopx! I'm Spork and I'll review this today. Before I begin though, I should tell you that reviews from people who may not like your pieces can also be ...

Hi Leah! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll review this today. :) First off, before I really begin, I want to say that I can relate to this poem. predicament doesn't involve ...