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Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hey all! I've been gone for six months or so. :( A lot of personal issues have happened, I'll probably blog about them if you're interested. But if not, I'm ...
Apr 17, 2012 -
Re: Game On (Level 2)
Hey gamergirl. I'm SporkPunk and I'll be reviewing this. :] Now, I'm going to go through this and correct errors as I see them and then expound on my corrections ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: Want It
Hey there preachergirl! I'm SporkPunk and I'll be reviewing this today. :] So, first off, I thought the idea was quite good but I think it could be executed a ...
Aug 20, 2011 -
Re: "The Glass Ballerina"
Hi there, Jace! I'm SporkPunk, and I'll be reviewing this today. I haven't read your other chapter, but after reading this I want to. :) Technical Stuff She inadvertedly played ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: I See Myself
Hi Delanie! I'm Sporks, and I'll be reviewing this today. This time, I will go line-by-line to address anything I see that might need...improvement. :) WHEN I LOOK AT MYSELF ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: How could you tell I was new?!
Welcome to YWS, Dezzy! There's nothing specific you should do, but you do have a lot of options. You can post a piece, check out the forums, go on chat, ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Poseidon
Hiya, Meg! :D Here as requested for a review. And thanks for reviewing my chapter. :] It was really helpful. Anyway, onto your review! I had felt the need to ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: The Ancients- Starting..
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Sporks and I'll be reviewing this today. Paradise beneath the heavens- The Ancient Memory: The Lord’s son, Zevro had discovered the perfect world where ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Uprising Ch. 2
Hey! Here's the next chapter if you're planning on following. If you came here first and want to read the beginning, just go here Okay? Okay. :D The boys were ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: A few changes to the header (and a new Help page)
The coins make me feel rich, hahaha.(:
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Beware the Ides of March: Free Literary Work Day
I agree about the after school rush thing. It'll happen. I'm putting off homework now to post something.:)
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Ask Me, I'm Fine
A/N: I actually like the subject matter of this poem. However, for some reason I am absolutely terrible when it comes to rhythm or meter. I don't possess that quirky ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
I have an obsession with different kinds of coffees. :D
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Patience chapter 1
Hey Sarah, Sporks here as requested!:) I'll point out anything as I go along. Walking to technology seemed longer today, was it because I was thinking of him? His liquid ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: The February 2011 Statistical Nonsense Post
Is it possible that people who live nearish Freeport (I'm in Bangor) might help boost those numbers? I don't really know how that works, except maybe by IP addresses. Either ...
Mar 3, 2011