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Well, I'm not exactly going to review it. It's good, but she's not going to commit suicide is she? 'Cos it's not exactly a nice way to end a story ...

Well, I myself am hopeless at writing these kinds of stories. And I don't usually enjoy reading them, but this was fantastic . You used everything that a professional uses, ...

Well, it would be pretty good! But as the other reviewers (whose names I can't be bothered to check) said, you need to fix up your grammar and spelling etc. ...

I honestly have no idea. It's just something I use as my username in a lot of online things.

Well, I'm also a member of MR UK, a forum for fans of the Maximum Ride book series of books. We use a lot of grammar, punctuation and spelling etc. ...

Hey, I'm new to the forum as you've probably already guessed. Anyway, a bit about myself... I mainly enjoy writing modern sci-fi/fantasy and Disaster/Apocalypse stories, but sometimes I may choose ...