SpiritedWolfe

Thanks Wolfie! And there is a reason to her being happy, which will be revealed soon. Sometimes I become careless when I type things on my tablets thanks for pointing ...

Actually Noelle, the tree is in his backyard xD I'll make sure to make that more clear. Also, I will try to balance it out more. I'm really glad you're ...

Thank you, but I did capitalize koala for a reason.

Thanks, I literally wrote this in five minutes, so sorry it wasn't very indepth.

Please excuse some grammatical and spelling errors in this review, for I am on a phone xD

So my goal was achieved. I meant to make it realistic for a purpose exposed in the future. It will make sense I promise! Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed ...

I noticed about the commas xD And thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. Before this chapter, I was actually doubting the security of my idea, but as ...

Thanks so much! And well, sorry to say your questions about the dream won't get answers for a while. I don't plan to revel that until... a lot happens xD ...

Thanks, and I like that you feel so highly of it! And I have no idea what's come over me with all the commas, I'll be sure to edit that.

My thing all ways removes the italics, thanks for pointing that out, I didn't notice xD

Thanks so much! I originally had italics there, but when I copy-pasted they didn't for I guess xD

Anytime! Just make sure to keep me posted!

I feel my reviewing skills have improved since the last time I reviewed you, hope I helped!!

I just now understood what you meant when you asked why they attended the public execution if someone was looking for them. I edited that to make it more clear ...

So sorry I couldn't do much criticism, hope I helped anyway!