SpiritedWolfe

Not happening.

The thing is, Sam's mind is just really fast paced (and he has no idea why).

Noooo. (Read chapter 11 >.> /

Always glad for nitpicks (because they are so easy to look over xD). Thanks so much!

Thanks for pointing those out, smart me xD The last line I was thinking more of Harrison saying more, haven't you had enough Syrin for today? Though I might consider ...

If you want to, of course (would have done it myself but I'm too shy xD)

It was the first thing that came to mind (the mailbox :P) since they are in a desert and a tree wouldn't work. And you may or may not see ...

I was going for he was trying to psych Sam out and get him to freak out and fight back. Maybe make it more clear that he moves the blade ...

Sorry didnt meant to post it three times o.O

I seriously forgot to mention reason behind the 'poking', but I gues it wouldn't have really fit there. *makes mental note to explain this* Thanks so much! Glad you're in ...

I seriously forgot to mention reason behind the 'poking', but I gues it wouldn't have really fit there. *makes mental note to explain this* Thanks so much! Glad you're in ...

I seriously forgot to mention reason behind the 'poking', but I gues it wouldn't have really fit there. *makes mental note to explain this* Thanks so much! Glad you're in ...

Plan on posting another one before Sunday, promise!

Don't worry, this was Chapter 4. It's just a meanie.

If you're ever unsure of something, by all means, point it out! Who knows, it may or may not be a mistake. I can understand why you'd be concerned about ...